National Poetry Week Haiku Competition
When our librarian Dr. George devised a school-wide Haiku competition for National Poetry Week, she barely reckoned with the breadth of creativity among Columba ākonga.
After a rigorous, intense and at-times enlightening judging process, it is our pleasure to celebrate the poetic prowess of the following students:
Congratulations to Lia Fisher (Year 9), the overall winner of the inaugural Columba College National Poetry Week competition! Lia’s Haiku managed to capture a range of feelings in 17 seemingly simple syllables, and stayed with the judges long after reading, which they felt is precisely the point of poetry. Well done, Lia!
Among the Highly Commended entries, nature was a popular theme, with Gwendolyn Somerville (Year 5) and Matilda Sutton (Year 9) beautifully evoking a calming stream and a cool breeze respectively; Samantha Maw (Year 9) took delight in describing the moonlight, while Ruby Jones (Year 9) spoke oh-so-poetically about the “overwhelming” beauty of a rainbow.
Samuel Reilly’s (Year 5) effort was deeply spiritual, giving the judges much pause for thought. Likewise, Skyla Murray (Year 12) eschewed a well-trodden path, creating a haiku-tour-de-force in the form of baking instructions – a sure recipe for success.
The entries from staff were no less enjoyable – Ms Lach’s ‘Bonsai Blues’ evocatively captured the thrill of tree-trimming; but it was an anonymous entry which truly stole the show. The judging panel was dazzled at the way a simple observation about a fabulous pair of shoes became a meditation on acceptance and self-assuredness.
Special mention must go to Mrs Pollard and the Year 6 class for their slideshow presentation – especially Toby Guy’s utterly delightful image of a sleepy cat in the spring sun, which had the judging panel longing for the change of seasons (as well as a quiet spot to curl up in, after all that hard work judging your haiku hijinks). If you see your name in print, please be sure to pop into the library to receive your sweet reward – and congratulations to all entrants.
Lia Fisher (Year 9) – Overall Winner
I watch the night sky
wondering where you might be
You were always there
Gwendolyn Somerville (Year 5)
The calming stream flows,
The wind whistles in the trees,
This beautiful creek
Matilda Sutton (Year 9)
Waiting patiently
The trees sway in the cool breeze
Feeling ecstatic
Samantha Maw (Year 9)
The dark sky rises.
Grey contrasts from the blue skies
Tonight the moon shines
Ruby Jones (Year 9)
As the turbulent
storm passes by…the rainbow
is overwhelming
Samuel Riley (Year 5)
The untimely souls
have risen from their deathbeds
to greet all spirits
Skyla Murray (Year 12)
Ingredients are:
- three and a half cups sugar
- two hundred grams of
sweetened condensed milk
- one two five grams of butter
- half a cup of milk
- three tablespoons of
golden syrup; pinch of salt
- vanilla essence
Method as follows:
1. Grease a cake tin and line
with baking paper.
2. Ingredients
(all except for vanilla)
into a saucepan.
3. Warm over heat
until sugar has dissolved
(ten to fifteen mins).
4. Bring to gentle
boil and then cook for ten
to fifteen minutes,
until it reaches
a soft ball consistency.
5. Remove from heat,
and add vanilla
(the amount is top secret).
6. Cool for five mins.
7. Beat with a
mixer until fudge is thick
and creamy; no gloss
(approx. ten minutes).
8. Pour into tin and cool.
9. Refrigerate.
10. Once set, cut in-
to shapes of your heart’s desire.
Share with everyone.
Ms Lach – ‘Bonsai Blues’
To trim off a branch
you will need a steady hand
making young trees old
Anonymous Staff Entry
Buckles and velvet
Not quite the right shade of blue;
Nevermind, it’s fine
Toby Guy (Year 6)
Cat in the tall grass
smelling the lovely flowers
Going to sleep now