Whakaarohia atu e te taniwha (Think about it, taniwha)
Daniel O'Brien - February 28, 2025
Ne’er alane oan the lang-raik, anither traipses beside she
Ithers come, aboon a bronzed kahu flauchters free
Athort the whenua, murmurations shapeshift an meet
Thoosands mair join the flock
A hikoi against the taniwha, with heids aw three
To cry doun against the fact
That Te Tirīti is not inequality afore the law
Nor taking richts fae thaim that are Pākehā
But insteid tae bield Māori hauora.
A bill o daimigin principle
Cleavin’ a country sat in offices on higher
With sichtless ideals unthinkable
E toru ngā upoko o tēnei taniwha
Engari, i tēnei wā, he teitei ake tētahi o ngā māhunga
Kua tārehu tōna Māoritanga
Kia pēhi ai ia ōna iwi
Ā, tōna whenua
Ki te whakangaro i ngā mahi i te tau 1840
A hikoi that walks on further
To awhi the mahi of Dame Whina Cooper
A hikoi o thoosands, Māori and Pākehā
To stop its strong-headed reign
Whakaarohia atu e te taniwha
We won’t let Aotearoa gae throu this again
Judges’ comments: An intriguing mash-up of Scottish and Te reo Māori with a great sense of rhythm. With lines like "Te Tirīti is not inequality afore the law / Nor taking richts fae thaim that are Pākehā / But insteid tae bield Māori hauora” it leaves the reader in no doubt as to its political nature.