Room 9 Report
We learnt about persuasive writing techniques for advertising for the businesses we created as part of our unit of inquiry in Room 9. See below some of our ideas.
Stella: I created a pet salon that has treats as well
Lily D: I created a unicorn cake shop
Amelia T.C: I created a spider drink shop
Here are some examples:
Lily
Rhetorical: What could be better than sitting down, relaxing and eating a slice of unicorn cake?
Jake
Alliteration: Perfect pokemon place
Janice
Alliteration: Janice's delicious donuts
Isaac
Facts: My pokemon cards are made out of cardboard not plastic!
Connor
Opinion: My pizza is the best in the world!
Matteo
Opinion: My pokemon store has the best packs!
Stella
Repetition: Animals are loved at my salon. My pet salon is not just any old pet salon, it is where animals get loved!
Julie
Rhetorical question: Is there anything more refreshing than Julie’s juicy lemonade?
Amelia
Exaggeration: My web drinks (spider drinks) are the best. You can't beat them!
Siobhan
Statistics: 100% of my customers are happy!
Kristy
Rule of three: My lemonade is healthy, mind blowing and tasty!