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Room 9 Report

Jessica Vader —

We learnt about persuasive writing techniques for advertising for the businesses we created as part of our unit of inquiry in Room 9. See below some of our ideas.


Stella: I created a pet salon that has treats as well
Lily D: I created a unicorn cake shop
Amelia T.C: I created a spider drink shop

Here are some examples:

Lily 
Rhetorical: What could be better than sitting down, relaxing and eating a slice of unicorn cake?

Jake 
Alliteration: Perfect pokemon place


Janice
Alliteration: Janice's delicious donuts

Isaac
Facts: My pokemon cards are made out of cardboard not plastic!

Connor 
Opinion: My pizza is the best in the world!

Matteo
Opinion: My pokemon store has the best packs!

Stella 
Repetition: Animals are loved at my salon. My pet salon is not just any old pet salon, it is where animals get loved!

Julie
Rhetorical question: Is there anything more refreshing than Julie’s juicy lemonade?

Amelia 
Exaggeration: My web drinks (spider drinks) are the best. You can't beat them!

Siobhan
Statistics: 100% of my customers are happy!

Kristy
Rule of three: My lemonade is healthy, mind blowing and tasty!