Ext(reme) Writers Go Bush!
As part of the Ext(reme) Writers learning about using of sensory, descriptive and figurative language, they explored the many different landscapes of Otari-Wilton Bush.
This experience then lead to poetry that would entertain, challenge, and/or engage an a reader. Please enjoy some of the students' writing below.
Fallen trees lie dead
A new generation sprouts
The cycle of life
Florence Langford
The gust.
It crashes and gushes.
Striking the land,
Toppling trees and flattening ferns.
Like a train it ploughs through the forest.
The breeze.
It drifts and glides
Calmly brushing the land,
Tapping trees and flowing over ferns.
Like water, it trickles through the forest.
Aden Winther
A tree, held up by
The beauty of nature herself,
Water stirs beneath
Louis Rendle
Light comes and goes,
temporarily expelling the shadows, and then
letting them roam
across the ancient trees
overseeing this thriving biome.
Gwen Dunning
Reality is a storm,
Of pain and wisdom
Facing danger
Bringing light
Elsa Johnston
A Journey
The drop is high
From above the canopy
As I am shown the edge I clench in fear
I am dropped over the edge spinning like a ballerina
I push through the ferns trying not to be caught
Finally touch down onto the muddy ground
On a ray of sun.
Juliet Boys
The silence is like a canvas waiting to be painted on, every sound a new brush of colour, every bird’s whistle a touch more detail. Even with my eyes closed, I can see a picture, only I will ever see, my imagination twisting the sounds until they form a paradise, my paradise. These are the songs of the birds, open to interpretation every word spoken, brushed from someone’s lips, it is a new sound to add to my painting, every image I only see with my eyes, everything I say only with my brain, is a picture of my heart, that will change yet always be the same.
Sienna Granland