A great piece of writing shared with me by Mia-Rae (Yr 2).

My sherbert fizz looks like the colours of out tongues and lungs, brain and a pig. It feels stretchy like elastic and like glue. It smells like lollies from the Wycola shop. It tastes really sour but... I took a deep breath and clogged my nose and ate it all!

But... at writing, I gulped down some water and finally took the disgusting sour flavour out of my mouth! It was really yucky and disgusting... Ugh!