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Room 6

Room 6 —

We used rich descriptive language and our senses to describe what we could see Outside Our Bedroom Window. Some of it we could really see but sometimes we added details from our imagination as well - can you tell the difference?

When I look out from my window I can see the grass digging the soil. The stars shining bright like the sky tower.The moon glimmering like lightning.The light from the cars zooming past. - Toby P

If i look out my Bedroom window I can see a beach and on the beach are penguins! And if you look into the water you might see big eels, with big teeth and jaws and powerful as a lion. You can hear penguins diving into the water and the water is warm. - Fin B

When I look outside my window I felt a quiet soft breeze against my cheek and I see a leaf gently drifting down a tree and I see animals and insects and Devonport beach. In the distance I see the neighbours house and Lucy Naylor walking her dog and the sky so blue and the sun rising.- Lucy M

When I look out of my window I see Peter Porker, the human torch and ant-man fighting green goblin and venom. A man drowning and a yellow knife falling on the man. I see the sky tower lighting up to make it bright. -Vinh

When I look outside my bedroom window I see stars shining in the sky and the sky tower lighting up. Drones shooting nerf bullets and flying around constellations everywhere buildings breaking.- Toby A

When I look out my bedroom window I see a zombie being struck by lightning that's crying for help. An alien invasion "help please..."- Hugo

When I look outside my bedroom window I can see my cat leaping roof to roof. My hedge blowing. The moon illuminating a house with hooligans hinged hanging from the house. Leaves rushing in the wind. ---Tom N

When I looked outside my bedroom window I saw the school lights slowly turning off one by one. I saw the bright red light flashing on top of the Sky Tower. I heard a few distant caws from seagulls down at the beach. WOW! I think I just saw a shooting star, I hope I made my wish fast enough. YUMM! I can taste that lolly I hid under my pillow. ACHOO ACHOO! I can smell the pollen and it’s getting up my nose! And wow those cars lights are zooming across the bridge like a ribbon of lights!    -Thea M

When I looked out my window I saw my cat striding along the dewy wet grass with its tail stuck up high. 

The stars are shimmering like glistening water on a hot summer day.

I could see the swings on the monkey bars swaying in the cool winter breeze. I could hear the morepork squawking as loud as a fire engine going to put out a fire.

I stay up all night and in the morning the sun stretches across the land like a big blanket and its beams warm the earth and start a new day.      - Nina C

When I looked out of my bedroom window I saw the shining sun sparkling onto the clear blue water.

Colourful towels dotted the burning hot sand.

Green palm trees swayed in the gentle wind and the seagulls flew in the big blue sky. The seashells spotted the bright yellow sand.

Some sea shells were as petite as jelly beans.

Boats filled the sea with colourful dots.

As the sun sets over the beach the birds sing a peaceful song as all the children cuddle up in bed waiting to start a new day.- Indie F

Went I looked out my bedroom window I saw

The Sky Tower poking through the clouds

And the light shining down into my room.

My dog is barking at the fireworks that are coming off the sky tower lighting up the sky like fire. The tree is swaying in the light like kites in the sky.-Cooper E.

When I look out of my bedroom window I see the glistening stars in the navy sky winking down at me.

I see my family’s robot dog taking the trash out,but the bin is glued to the concrete.I hear the music from sky casino being as loud as a lion. I smell my mum and dad’s pizza screaming for them to eat it. The wind howls outside,rattling my window.I see the colourful lights from the Sky Tower shining so bright it’s like they are showing off.- Ellie Rose A