Room 7 has created a 'moment in time' piece of writing. We have been focussing on enhancing our writing with adjectives.

A Special Memory 

Written by Tahlia 

I heard people splashing, screaming and shouting.
I saw tropical fish in the freezing, cold, clear water. I felt ecstatic when I touched the hard rocky ground. I wondered if I would ever have to go home.

Vietnam Water Park

Written by Bryden

I heard people screaming "lets do it again! ". I saw wet, soaking water stinging my eyes. I felt gigantic, strong waves pushing me back. I wondered how my beautiful family was doing.

Riding My Bike

Written by Leo 

I heard freezing, cold wind blowing against my face. I felt sweaty, nervous and excited. I wondered if I was going to fall off my bike.

Motion Entertainment

Written by Logan 

I heard the machines clunking. I saw beams of light hitting people at chest height. I felt amazing, like I was floating in another galaxy. I wondered if we could have more time here.